http://selflesslight.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] selflesslight.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] shatterverse 2008-04-17 10:46 pm (UTC)

Okay, that works.

Eventually the narration is certain Val will learn how to keep her feet, or at least fall gracefully.

Until then, she's flat on her back, shoving off the ground to... well, it doesn't deserve to be dignified with the name 'tackle', but it is at least a lunge at his knees.

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